Story Idea: Benedite

In a world where goodness is a deplete-able resource, what happens when it runs out?

In many stories, there is a special power source that makes whoever has it super powerful, but at a cost. Often, the more the person uses the power, the more evil/selfish/uncaring/crazy he becomes. Examples that come to mind include the Epics in Brandon Sanderson’s Steelheart, which are extremely powerful yet disregard human life as worthless, and the scepters in the Eric Rex series (by Kaza Kingsley), which are nearly all-powerful yet drive the user mad.

What if, instead, the power makes all who use it even better, as well as more powerful? Let’s call the resource Benedite (which turns out to be a real word in Italian), after the Latin word for Good (bene), and make it mine-able like coal is. In fact, let’s make benedite even more like coal and say that it’s plentiful, non-renewable, and, importantly, deplete-able.

For centuries, everyone buys and sells this benedite. Everyone who uses it is a nicer person (not necessarily naïve, though), and much stronger to boot. Civilization makes huge leaps, because everyone can more quickly finish their work, and there is very little conflict. After all, everyone is nice and happy. The richest, those who can afford the most benedite, are also the most charitable. Poverty and crime are virtually non-existent. Then, benedite starts running out. Not stolen or anything like that, just used up.

The first signs that benedite is running low would probably be found in the food industry (assuming benedite is edible). I’m sure that at some point some genius would think to start selling benedite enhanced food to the people to boost sales (like we sell vitamin enhanced food). People might still have to take benedite pills (or whatever), but having all of the food contain benedite would make getting it even easier. Perhaps junk food would be food that has no benedite in it (after all, it probably helps you heal faster too). Slowly, as the cost of benedite starts going up, the amount of benedite in each piece of food would go down, until foods that have high quantities of it are seen as luxury foods. When the announcement comes that no more benedite is being found, even the junk food with very little benedite would suddenly rise in value.

Benedite, which had been almost free only a few months (or years) before, suddenly rises in value, leaving only the richest with any left. Now the population has to deal with crime and poverty for the first time in hundreds of years, and they are totally unprepared. Those who still have the benedite are forced to decide what to do with what’s left. Do they give it to the people, only to make it run out faster? Some do, perhaps because they think that it’s the right thing to do, or perhaps because they broke under the pressure of the riots that would surely have come. Others decide that it would be in the best interest of everyone if the benedite was kept to a select few who would be used to keep the population safe, sort of like the Justice League. The benedite enhanced “cops” would, after all, want nothing more than the good of the people, and they would be much stronger than the average man. This would preserve the benedite longer. There are some programs which are set up to help wean the people off of the benedite and set them up so that they can survive without it.

But there is, and it turns out, has always been, corruption, even with benedite. There are a few far secluded countries that hadn’t even heard of benedite. There are those in the civilized country that deliberately avoid using benedite, for a variety of reasons. Note: there are very few of these people; after all, benedite has been around for centuries and has no harmful side effects, but plenty of good effects. Some avoid it because of personal belief, but most who avoid it are those who are trying to take advantage of other people. Many who never use benedite are afraid that if they use it they will turn themselves in for their past crimes. It is very hard to be bad in a civilization like this, but some are.

Rich people might buy a lot of benedite to make themselves seem trustworthy, but never use it, and some people would deliberately not use it so that they can work as mercenaries. Working as a mercenary without benedite would be hard, though, because the average person would be much stronger than you, and the average important person would be even stronger. Perhaps the benedite-less would primarily attack the other benedite-less.

Above all that, there is a very very very small group of people who are immune to the effects of benedite, whether immune to the strengthening effects, or, even worse, immune to the purifying part, allowing them to commit terrible acts without weakness.

Another part of this is the fact that the entire world has been built to accommodate these super strong, super nice, (maybe super smart,) people. For example, none of the doors would have locks, because no one would ever even think to steal anything.  Also, much of what would have been easy is now next to impossible. You can imagine how different the world would be if everyone was super powered. Everything would be designed to be used, and run, by people with super strength, super speed, maybe super brains, etc. Not only would the world be short on goodness, it would also be short on just about everything.


I think I would really enjoy reading a book based on this, and I’ve grown to really like this idea as I’ve typed it. I’m sure there is much more that can be fleshed out of this idea, but so far this was fun. I wonder what the science industry would be doing, trying to replicate/create benedite in a lab. In the story, would Earth ever get benedite back?

~ George

 

 

Change Log of August 1st, 2014

At the end of every day that I change something, I’m going to make a post that highlights all of the changes and/or posts that have been made that day. This way I can change previous posts and actually have the changes be found, plus reader will be able get to all the new posts without scrolling down too much. Note: Since this post will be the last thing I post each day, it is less likely to be properly cleaned up, as I will be rather tired at that point

New posts:

  • Finally I’ve got an Idea Polish Level: 4 published with the post Type-able Lewis Dot Structure. I started the draft months ago, but it turned out to be a much harder concept to explain than I thought.

Major Changes:

Minor Changes:

  • none

Of Special Note:

  • none

~ George

Type-able Lewis Dot Structure

After messing up with Lewis dot structures on a chemistry test a while back (I forgot to draw any of the dots. Otherwise it would have been nearly 100% 🙁 ),  so I wanted to come up with an alternate to Lewis dot structures that doesn’t need dots. I still haven’t figured out a way to do that, but at the time I instead ended up with a way to format a Lewis dot structure in a way that you could type it. Note: you must already know how to draw out simple Lewis dot structures and the terminology behind them to understand this post.

Here’s a table to represent the various symbols that you use to type the Lewis dot structures

The symbol for (a)…

  • Single bond is a dash (-)
  • Double bond is an equal sign (=)
  • Triple bond is an equal sign and a dash (=- or -=)
  • Quadruple bond is two equal signs (==)
  • (If you need greater values, combine the dashes and equal signs until you have the number you need)
  • One valence electron is a period (.)
  • Two valence electrons is a colon (:)
  • Three valence electrons is a colon and a period (.: or :.)
  • Four valence electrons is two colons (::)
  • (If you need greater values, combine the periods and colons until you have the number you need)

To help with typing the Lewis dot structures, parenthesis will need to be used around each atom in the molecule. The first set is parenthesis (), the second set is brackets [], the third set is braces {}, and if you need more than either loop back to parentheses or don’t bother typing it. For example, Nitrogen’s Lewis dot structure would be (N:.), with the colon+period representing nitrogen’s three valence electrons. O2’s Lewis dot structure would be [::O=(O::)].

There are two colons next to each O to represent the four valence electrons that each oxygen has, and the equal sign to represent the double bond. Why one atom is in parenthesis and the other is not will be explained next.

A more complicated example would be CH4’s typed Lewis dot structure: [C-(H)-(H)-(H)-(H)]

None of the atoms in this molecule have any valence electrons, so there aren’t any periods or colons. Something more noticeable about it is that the hydrogen atoms, while seemingly connected in the typed version, aren’t connected in the drawn version. The way you get around that is by having the atom that is being connected to outside of the parentheses. The carbon atom has only the brackets around it, meanwhile all of the hydrogen atoms also have the parentheses.

You can even type the Lewis dot structure of a molecule by using all three bracket types, such as C2H3N’s molecule: {C-[H]-[H]-[H]-[C-=(N:.)]} .

Blog - Idea Level 3 - Type-able Lewis Dot Structure - H3C2N

The typed Lewis dot structure starts with the left carbon, showing it with only the braces surrounding it. That means that all of the atoms in the molecule that are only surrounded by both the braces and the brackets are connected to the carbon atom. Any atoms that are also surrounded by parentheses aren’t connected to the first carbon. The second carbon is surrounded by both the braces and the brackets, but not the parentheses. That means that any molecules that are surrounded by the braces, the same pair brackets that the 2nd carbon is surrounded by, and parentheses are connected to it. The nitrogen in the molecule fits all of those criteria, and as you can see in the drawn out version it is connected to the 2nd carbon but not the first.

Unfortunately this form obviously has limitations, such as those that a normal Lewis dot structure has, as well as the fact that the typed diagrams will rapidly get very complex.

Something I’m experimenting with is how to type the structure when it has rings in it, like carbon rings.

One possible way is to use something to communicate a linked section of a sort, like asterisks do for footnotes. So the above’s typed Lewis dot structure, starting with the bottom left carbon and going around clockwise, would be {C-[*]-[H]=[C-(H)-(C-{H}={C-[H]-[*C-(H)]})]}

For fun, and also to test this method of diagramming molecules, I Googled “Large Lewis dot structures” to see what came up, and decided that I would type it out myself at some point. Until I find the time to do what is probably going to be a long and difficult task, here’s the molecule I found:

 

Also, I’m thinking that there is some way to show the molecular polarity (or maybe the proper term is electronegativity) using greater than and less than signs (<>), but until I find my Chemistry book I can’t remember any of the proper terms, so until then just know that there’s more to come.

~ George

Weirdly Spelled Words

One day Patricia and I were talking about something and somehow we started thinking of weirdly spelled/hard to spell words, so I’ll be updating this ongoing list of words that I come find. If words are weirdly spelled for the same reason than either I won’t include them or I will lump them together. The weird part of each word will be in bold and separated from the rest of the word. Definitions and pronunciations are found at dictionary.com.

S er gea nt – [sahr-juhnt] – noun: a non-commissioned army officer of a rank above that of corporal.

wr ough t – [rawt] – verb: Archaic except in some senses. a simple past tense and past participle of work

ei gn – [reyn] – noun: the period during which a sovereign occupies the throne. verb (used without object): to possess or exercise sovereign power or authority.

bizar re – [bih-zahr] – adjective: markedly unusual in appearance, style, or general character and often involving incongruous or unexpected elements; outrageously or whimsically strange; odd

leag eu – [leeg] – noun: a covenant or compact made between persons, parties, states, etc., for the promotion or maintenance of common interests or for mutual assistance or service

ri gh te ous – [rahy-chuhs] – adjective: characterized by uprightness or morality

fj ord – [fyawrd, fyohrd] – noun: a long, narrow arm of the sea bordered by steep cliffs: usually formed by glacial erosion.

~ George

Change Log of July 9, 2014

At the end of every day (or, at least every day that I change something), I’m going to make a post that highlights all of the changes and/or posts that have been made that day. This way I can change previous posts and actually have the changes be found, plus reader will be able get to all the new posts without scrolling down too much. Note: Since this post will be the last thing I post each day, it is less likely to be properly cleaned up, as I will be rather tired at that point

New posts:

  • Weirdly Spelled Words: This is something that came out Tricia (my sister) mentioning that Sergeant is hard to spell. After that I started trying to other bizarrely spelled word (including bizarre). I have many more words ready to be edited in as soon as I have the time.

Major Changes:

  • I moved a few more the posts around to their new categories. As I said last time, when I’m done figuring out the categories I will specify which posts are moved around and have links to them
  • I added a new paragraph (the 4th bullet point) to Interesting Observation: Social Norms. I thought of what I wrote after re-reading the post today.
  • I added the miscellaneous section on my main page, and I added a category for the change logs.

Minor Changes:

  • I added a short explanation of my joke in Joke – Funny Bone, in case anyone didn’t get it. I also added my signoff ” ~ George”

Of Special Note:

  • From Thursday to Saturday I (probably) won’t have access to a computer, so there won’t be any changes then
  • If I fix a small typo or change an unimportant word in a post then I won’t report it in a change log

 

~ George

Change Log of July 7, 2014

At the end of every day (or, at least every day that I change something), I’m going to make a post that highlights all of the changes and/or posts that have been made that day. This way I can change previous posts and actually have the changes be found, plus reader will be able get to all the new posts without scrolling down too much. Note: Since this post will be the last thing I post each day, it is less likely to be properly cleaned up, as I will be rather tired at that point

New posts:

  • Published Joke – Funny Bone, a joke I came up with a bit ago and finally got around to publishing

Major Changes:

  • I made the “Idea Polish Level” pages 1 – 4 sub pages to one page called “My ideas”, as part of my new organization method
  • I added sub pages Idea Polish Level 0.5, 1.5, 2.5, and 3.5 under Idea Polish Level pages 1, 2, 3, and 4 respectively, to hold pages that aren’t quite cleaned up enough to be published officially yet, but have been worked on. These may end up being private (not see-able by the public)
  • I edited the descriptions of “Idea Polish Level” pages 1 – 4 to fit better with my new organization method. The descriptions will probably change as I figure out this system
  • Moved a few of the posts around to their new categories. In the future I will specify which posts are moved around and have links to them, but this time I’ll just say that it’s because of “my new organization method” (I feel like I’m saying that a lot 🙂 )

Minor Changes:

Of Special Note:

  • Tomorrow I will continue my reorganizing of my posts and clean up, and I’ll also publish a few drafts

 

~ George

Certified Brilliant – June Edition

Certified Brilliant is something I’m doing in which every day I post something that I found on the internet. To qualify, I must think that it is simply brilliant, epic, and/or incredible. Since I don’t want to have too many posts doing small things, I’ll edit this post every day, adding a new brilliant/epic/incredible thing. Every month I will make a new post and start updating it. My favorite brilliant/incredible/epic thing in each post will be starred.

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June 7 – Certified Brilliant <–*Star*

“The distance from this sentence to your eye is my sculpture”

– Rethinking Curating – Art After New Media, By Beryl Graham and Sarah Cook

I found the sentence in this video, about 1 minute and 30 second into it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VztSdwYPFCE&index=5&list=UU6nSFpj9HTCZ5t-N3Rm3-HA

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June 6 – Certified Brilliant

…found tucked between the pages Julius Caesar’s diary…

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June 5 – Certified Brilliant

Blog - Certified Brilliant - DHD Crimes of Opportunity

 

Title Text: “Oh right. This isn’t the Sahara desert, because in the Sahara desert water is CHEAPER”

Sign off text: “This water is gonna go great with my sandwich, which apparently is made out of a bar of gold.”

I may or may not do this someday ; ) . Source: http://thedoghousediaries.com/4577

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June 4 – Certified Epic <–*Star*

One day my friends were all talking about what their dream car was. Someone got the bright idea to ask me, the guy who had probably spent little more than a few minutes in his life thinking about the question. “Hey George, what about you? What’s your dream car?” he said.  I looked up. “The Batmobile”.  Then I got back to my book

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June 3 – Certified Incredible

Apart from repeated use of the word “freakin” (which actually isn’t a bad word,  just associated with them),  this is an incredible sounding technology which I hope is as good as it looks. Support them at https://www.indiegogo.com/projects/solar-roadways#home

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June 2 – Certified Brilliant

That night, retired USAF pilots covertly replaced the '62' with '50'.

Title Text: “That night, retired USAF pilots covertly replaced the ’62’ with ’50’.”

Who knew that space was so close? Link: www.explainxkcd.com/wiki/index.php/1375

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June 1 – Certified Incredible <–*Star*

A poem to inspire you to put down your phone and look up

 

~ George

Joke – Learner’s Permit

Having recently gotten my learner’s permit, I’m considering putting a sign in the back window of any vehicle I drive to warn of my lack of skill. My current favorite warning that I’ve thought of:

 

n00b driver, please don’t PWN me

 

At least they can’t get angry at my (probably) poor driving skills while they’re laughing 🙂

~ George